Hello, fans! I bring you Chapter 3 of Deepest Pain!
CHAPTER 3- The Young Warrior
Within weeks, the boy had grown to a Level 12 Knight, and was obliterating every monster within a 3.88-mile radius of his supposed mother. Cygnus praised the boy every time hoping to show her apparent love for her child. All he replied was with a "Thanks, Mom."
Meanwhile, the Black Mage was in his blackened lair watching each scene. "Soon...the world will bow before me and my warrior child!" A Zombie Mushmom approached him. "Yes, the boy shows true strength. I know. He and two others defeated me, and they were practically weak!" The Black Mage turned and said, "Yes, that is so. However, we must begin the assault on Cygnus soon or risk another loss." He turned once more and saw something strange: ALL of the monsters were suddenly assaulting them, and the boy kept them back. ALL of them back. "The assault! What is happening!?" A nearby Tauromacis shrugged. "He may be falsifying himself to cover us up." The Black Mage's voice only grew louder as he said, "This should NOT be happening!!!" He quickly punched the desk in front of him and sat back.
Back at Cygnus's stronghold, the monsters quickly began to decline. They ran like the wind, and the boy followed them up to the 3.88 mile radius limit. "Excellent work, Dumai!" said Cygnus. "Dumai? That's my name?" asked the boy. "Yeah." said Cygnus, smiling. "Thanks, Mom," said Dumai.
Suddenly, something strange happened...
Dumai suddenly felt off-balance, and passed out. Cygnus caught him and looked at the sky, which was quickly turning dark grey, even black...
Monday, September 10, 2012
Monday, September 3, 2012
Deepest Pain (Chapter 2)
Here you go, fans! The moment you've all been waiting for: Chapter 2 of my Maplestory fanfic!
Chapter 2- Mirror Child
The Black Mage retreats to his blackened lair to begin creating his deadly warrior. Little does he know that some of the monsters have disobeyed his orders to stay put and are going to attack Cygnus! He turns to address his monsters, and finds a small group is missing. "WHERE ARE THOSE DRIVELOUS PIGS!?" he yells. All the monsters who have fingers point towards the door, which is letting in tiny amounts of moonlight. "Bah! They're dead, anyway," says the Black Mage, closing the door.
Meanwhile, Cygnus has already received word that the Pigs were indeed attacking. She prepares her Knights for battle, and they charge at the Pigs, swords blazing through the white meat. A Pig charges at Cygnus, and she gasps. This pig is raving mad. The Pig lunges, and is almost immediately knocked aside by the Black Mage himself. Cygnus's eyes widen at the blackened figure. A Knight uses a nearby Light Stone to force the Mage to retreat. "Someday..." says the Black Mage, "Someday...I will claim the throne." Neinheart says with a smile, "I doubt it." The Black Mage disappears in a poof of smoke.
A few minutes later, Cygnus is reading the Ancient Book of Maple World when she hears someone knock at the door nearby. She hears scampering, and goes to investigate. She opens the door to find a small baby wrapped in a purple silk blanket and the Maple World logo embroidered on the back of the blanket. She smiles and takes the child in.
-END OF CHAPTER-
Spoiler: You might want to pay attention to that baby.
Chapter 2- Mirror Child
The Black Mage retreats to his blackened lair to begin creating his deadly warrior. Little does he know that some of the monsters have disobeyed his orders to stay put and are going to attack Cygnus! He turns to address his monsters, and finds a small group is missing. "WHERE ARE THOSE DRIVELOUS PIGS!?" he yells. All the monsters who have fingers point towards the door, which is letting in tiny amounts of moonlight. "Bah! They're dead, anyway," says the Black Mage, closing the door.
Meanwhile, Cygnus has already received word that the Pigs were indeed attacking. She prepares her Knights for battle, and they charge at the Pigs, swords blazing through the white meat. A Pig charges at Cygnus, and she gasps. This pig is raving mad. The Pig lunges, and is almost immediately knocked aside by the Black Mage himself. Cygnus's eyes widen at the blackened figure. A Knight uses a nearby Light Stone to force the Mage to retreat. "Someday..." says the Black Mage, "Someday...I will claim the throne." Neinheart says with a smile, "I doubt it." The Black Mage disappears in a poof of smoke.
A few minutes later, Cygnus is reading the Ancient Book of Maple World when she hears someone knock at the door nearby. She hears scampering, and goes to investigate. She opens the door to find a small baby wrapped in a purple silk blanket and the Maple World logo embroidered on the back of the blanket. She smiles and takes the child in.
-END OF CHAPTER-
Spoiler: You might want to pay attention to that baby.
Saturday, September 1, 2012
Deepest Pain (a Maplestory fanfic)
Hello once more, fanfiction peeps! I bring you my first fanfic. But since I have NEVER once created a fanfic before, I'll just make it up as I go along. Don't be expecting regular updates, please.
Deepest Pain
CHAPTER 1
A fine day on the island of Ereve. But this does not show any happiness to the empress of all Maple World: Empress Cygnus. She goes about her daily business, and eventually, Neinheart stops her. "What's wrong? Normally you're much more...er...happy," said Neinheart. Cygnus replies, "It's always the same thing over and over again." Neinheart raises an eyebrow. "And to top it all off, I do NOT have an heir to the throne when I'm good and dead." Neinheart puts a hand on Cygnus's shoulder. "I'm sure you'll find somebody nice." Cygnus starts to smile, and they hug. Cygnus is now much happier.
Meanwhile, in the blackened lair of the Black Mage, he watches the tender scene with much hate. And yet, he has a desire which cannot be quenched. "That throne should be mine," said the Black Mage. "Hey, Black Mage?" asked a nearby Devil Slime. "Why not create the most devilish child ever and then send it to Cygnus for her to raise up?" The Black Mage turns to the Devil Slime. "Why, what a brilliant idea!" said the Black Mage. "We'll have someone give her the most devilish child she has ever seen!" The Black Mage now grows more dramatic as he declares, "He will destroy Cygnus and the Knights, and I will rule ALL!!!" The nearby monsters clap and cheer. Suddenly, a creature bursts in the room. "MAIL MONSTER!!!" says the creature, and he gives the Black Mage an envelope. He quickly darts out of the room, as the dark hands of the Mage open the envelope. All that is inside is a small bottle filled with clear fluid.
-END OF CHAPTER-
More soon!
Deepest Pain
CHAPTER 1
A fine day on the island of Ereve. But this does not show any happiness to the empress of all Maple World: Empress Cygnus. She goes about her daily business, and eventually, Neinheart stops her. "What's wrong? Normally you're much more...er...happy," said Neinheart. Cygnus replies, "It's always the same thing over and over again." Neinheart raises an eyebrow. "And to top it all off, I do NOT have an heir to the throne when I'm good and dead." Neinheart puts a hand on Cygnus's shoulder. "I'm sure you'll find somebody nice." Cygnus starts to smile, and they hug. Cygnus is now much happier.
Meanwhile, in the blackened lair of the Black Mage, he watches the tender scene with much hate. And yet, he has a desire which cannot be quenched. "That throne should be mine," said the Black Mage. "Hey, Black Mage?" asked a nearby Devil Slime. "Why not create the most devilish child ever and then send it to Cygnus for her to raise up?" The Black Mage turns to the Devil Slime. "Why, what a brilliant idea!" said the Black Mage. "We'll have someone give her the most devilish child she has ever seen!" The Black Mage now grows more dramatic as he declares, "He will destroy Cygnus and the Knights, and I will rule ALL!!!" The nearby monsters clap and cheer. Suddenly, a creature bursts in the room. "MAIL MONSTER!!!" says the creature, and he gives the Black Mage an envelope. He quickly darts out of the room, as the dark hands of the Mage open the envelope. All that is inside is a small bottle filled with clear fluid.
-END OF CHAPTER-
More soon!
Friday, August 24, 2012
Ladies and GentleBWAAAH!!!
Hello people of Blogger (and hopefully beyond)! This blog was created by me, LoopyDawg, to show you some of my awesome Fan-fiction! The only reason this blog is around is so I can show you my fan-fiction and not have to deal with stuff based on ONE particular topic. Also, I don't want to deal with FanFiction.net because they have complications with me. Don't flame, troll, etc., or I will block you.
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